Monday, October 24, 2005

Tom Kardon's long battle with the City

So this may be different on the actual paper, but the title looks horrible on the website. I don't know what is the actual headline and what is the nut graf. Whichever the two, it sounds like this Kardon guy has been fighting a good fight to get some extra space for his car parts. That's a long freakin time! GO TOM! Good luck to ya buddy!
I have another question about this article. In the sentence, "First Ward Councilwoman Almeta Crayton has worked to ensure these meetings between Kardon and the neighbors continue," would the First still be capitalized if it were not the first word? Whoa that's a lot of firsts? Though I passed my grammar test, I'm still not doing very well with it!

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